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SENTINEL POETRY OPEN FORUM
Welcome to the Sentinel Poetry Open Forum. You may post a poem of any length, theme or style here. Please be aware that children might read these poems, so please go easy on bad language. A forum only makes sense when people comment on each other's work, so let's get this forum going. |
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Lucy
Nov 17, 05 - 6:15 AM |
Raw
why the pucnctuation..? liberalism post structuralist babble give me raw words; semiotics dripping with the blood of my emotion. Fresh, still pulsing, as though torn from my body still tender, moist and weighted. Give me words in the way of fumes...to sting my eyes make them potent and dense. give me words as stones, lay them across my body so i can feel their pressure. Let them reduce me to tears. |
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Bebeya
Mar 6th, 2006 - 11:56 AM |
Re: Raw
Loved your poem. Uncompromising--meant for the strong at heart. 
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