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SENTINEL POETRY OPEN FORUM
Welcome to the Sentinel Poetry Open Forum. You may post a poem of any length, theme or style here. Please be aware that children might read these poems, so please go easy on bad language. A forum only makes sense when people comment on each other's work, so let's get this forum going. |
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Martin Jack
Dec 10, 05 - 2:57 PM |
Rusting
Rusting over the shoulder of artists rust cups a hand, whispers miscarriages into the ink well their lost waves pile up on an interstate highway heading to flat Ohio by the hulks of crashed masters a blackened canvas weeps an abortion red cords cut from the brainstorm empty out in frozen paint |
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Lucy
Dec 11th, 2005 - 12:50 PM |
Re: Rusting
Edgy and vivid....fantastic portrayl and metaphor |
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anita slemp
Dec 22nd, 2005 - 10:21 PM |
Re: Rusting
cool very deep |
Hayden
Jan 4th, 2006 - 12:40 PM |
Re: Rusting
Deep, Dark and subtle descriptions that gives the poem a feeling and i like the way you describe the canvas as weeping. Almost like it helps to form the art that the artist is creating. |
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