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SENTINEL POETRY OPEN FORUM
Welcome to the Sentinel Poetry Open Forum. You may post a poem of any length, theme or style here. Please be aware that children might read these poems, so please go easy on bad language. A forum only makes sense when people comment on each other's work, so let's get this forum going. |
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Hayden
Jan 4, 06 - 1:20 PM |
Plethora of Colour
Sighing eyes of breaking skies, Signal for the solemn and humble, Thoughts tease and poke, With gracious proceedings, My fingers stream golden thread, Happiness blurs through my speech, Dancing and celebrating, Pulsing an orange glow, My heart shudders and shakes, Colours melt from concrete walls, Pasty complexions flow free, A plethora of colour burns, Comforting tingles spark creation, A flowing connection of feelings, Gaping voids of joy swallow me, I fall through worlds of laughter, And it will never cease in my mind. |
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Lucy
Jan 13th, 2006 - 8:46 AM |
Re: Plethora of Colour
I am a great fan of your work, It is vivid and sharp. I particularly like this one because while it is so real that it is almost intimidating, it shows an intensity of pleasure as opposed to an intensity of negativity. Keep writing from the heart. And read as much other works as possible to help your own technique and broaden your inspiration. |
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