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SENTINEL POETRY OPEN FORUM
Welcome to the Sentinel Poetry Open Forum. You may post a poem of any length, theme or style here. Please be aware that children might read these poems, so please go easy on bad language. A forum only makes sense when people comment on each other's work, so let's get this forum going. |
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Rob
Apr 6, 06 - 6:28 AM |
Hello, new here. Comments on this one??
6:45 Have you always been so loud? I don’t recall it so.. I would trudge through mud and soil for your call. I would wake for your beckon But now I want to rest With my sunflower And unlike the roses that she turns, She, to me, is without thorn You echo through the day Clutching hard, as if it were her magpie (whom I would not salute) For 10 whole hours you do not let go Switch you off switch you off …so we may sleep evermore Comments would be really welcome! |
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Lucy
Apr 20th, 2006 - 7:08 AM |
Re: Hello, new here. Comments on this one??
I like your style...exotic, yet elements of the commonplace. Also, a sence of urgency, nervousness and longing. Nice |
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Rob
Apr 20th, 2006 - 8:26 AM |
Re: Hello, new here. Comments on this one??
Thanks for your feedback ;o) |
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