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SENTINEL POETRY OPEN FORUM
Welcome to the Sentinel Poetry Open Forum. You may post a poem of any length, theme or style here. Please be aware that children might read these poems, so please go easy on bad language. A forum only makes sense when people comment on each other's work, so let's get this forum going. |
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Lucy
Apr 20, 06 - 7:14 AM |
Alltitude
Pulling away, I steel myself. Two binary points of call; one cold, hard, clinical and very real. The other like electrcity, or oxygen, you can't see it but its there, diffusing in the immediate vicinity... epic, lunging, demanding recognition. Which it recieves; I marvel, gush, gasp and extentuate. To be fair, I'm hormonal, quite fragile-and its raining... But I have unwittingly offered up, pulsing and beating, all of me. Every blemish and every insecurity. Doing so, I am aviated. And, with every text, every look, each finger on my skin, each gesture and truth, I ascend. This height makes me giddy. And with every rung the fatality of a fall worsens. |
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Hayden
Jul 27th, 2006 - 12:24 PM |
Re: Alltitude
Wow! like the poem! Its's quite strange its almost like your trying to make up an excuse for the first verse, but the first verse is great! It conjures up a world were physics dont apply like a mental state. A world inside of ones mind. Like an inner peace a sanctum of sanity (or insanity). The second verse i imagine to be about letting go, not giving up but realising something, realising that you are what you are and you know what you are. The end reminds me of meditation, the feeling you get when you reach your inner peace, but thats what i think! |
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