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SENTINEL POETRY OPEN FORUM
Welcome to the Sentinel Poetry Open Forum. You may post a poem of any length, theme or style here. Please be aware that children might read these poems, so please go easy on bad language. A forum only makes sense when people comment on each other's work, so let's get this forum going. |
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Lee J.
Aug 15, 06 - 4:22 AM |
cedars after midnight
Is it about cedars after midnight? their latent bodies flushing copper sheen in moonlight moist dew fingers of hungry stare & heat quietly touching a scarf of summer warmth about their truth for things they were and yet to be coin makers of secret waters everlasting flow growing in the mind of Galilee humid souls Venus takes her bow their musical whispers shall see precise ecstasy implode nightingale’s east breeze kind wide in sea of half shadow collapses down aside long married Persian roses dreaming human sounds now the world light golden bracelets jingle a fragrant expanse manna-dew sentimental leafy quiet moments plucking fulfillment from the air patterns constructed by a mind of lutes fidgets of sap oozing lush swells escaping in an ocean of heaven’s mortality hunger chasing colors of ambition of uncontrollable wanton red blossoms slide down the neck of spiritual deeply wound on bare shoulders thigh mouth and tongue have dared their coat purse of fire crowns paranormal calls passing perfume to the wind becoming molecules of gushing hum song pouring foam of evening gardens heart of cedar drumming poem after midnight bare fluorescence becomes mind of flesh this poem was inspired by nature's love, about the spiritual bond with love, about loving oneself, as love does not always come from another person, but from life...and living it... |
Hayden WB
Nov 8th, 2006 - 12:52 PM |
Re: cedars after midnight
I like it! It cunjures up alot of emotion and instincts as well, makes me feel at one with nature. And i feel that love and the way youve expressed it does indeed make it magical and extremely spiritual. |
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