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Hayden WB

Magical_melvin@hotmail.co.uk


Nov 8, 06 - 1:14 PM
CORRUPTION OF THE WORLD

Ill leave,
Where too?
Just go and leave,
And hopefully not come back,

The shouts from drunkards swigging down barrels of poison,
The hooded figures in white loom in gangs on street corners,
Baseball bats in hand blackened with the damage dealt to minorities,
The wild eyed drivers speeding through new motorways pedal to the floor,

The hurled abuse floats through the air in mystical undertones,
The background music to the world i wish i could adore,
The common place stereotypes floute they're bling bling,
The homeless spread on metal chairs in town yet another failed prospect,

So what will we do?
35 years left till we burn,
3-4 hours till threatened again by a stranger,
2-3 days till a drunkard yells at me,
Consequences of our actions?

They're are the others,
The open minded individuals with hope,
The ones with need for freedom and a release from this barbaric place,
But theres no way out,

Hate criteria,
Financial,
Family,
Society,
Control us all,
But when ive had enough ill break them all,
And run back to the forests,
To the only safe haven,
Nature, the birds, trees, plants,
The only beauty left,

(I hate this place i live in now, it used to be friendly or maybe thats just my skewed view when i was younger. Its full of yobs and fools, a mix of drunkards and criminals. The schools corrupt, no-one is kicked out because they dont want to blacken theyre record, instead they chose to blacken my life. Fair? no way, no community left in the world anymore, we fight for ourselves, when i pass these A levels im off. As far as possible where im a person not a clone. Where is the world going? i think this is the end, or at least i hope, id rather the world end now and save those yet to be insulted or mutilated or abused. I want to live but i dont mind dying, i dont want to die. Ok thats enough im done.)


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