Henry, well put. I DID think the first part could have been a bit stronger. However, it gained momentum after awhile (in my opinion.) And once I picked up on who-was-who at the College, I enjoyed it more. It will be hard for ANYONE to match Biggers writing. I believe Mr. Swann has another book coming out next year. As you say, hopefully, his stories will improve with each one. Nice feedback. T.Y.S.M.